[OH-Publicity] Looking for blog post feedback - Kyzz/Kevin

[Shauna Gordon-McKeon]

On Thu, Apr 17, 2014 at 6:06 PM, Mike Linksvayer <ml at gondwanaland.com>wrote:

> It's a flattering post for OH, well done. :)
>
> One sentence is kind of hard to read: "The most shocking part to me was
> how efficient OpenHatch is about getting people involved in the open source
> community – which was from the ground up." I suspect removing "– which was"
> would help.
>
> In the last paragraph it's not entirely clear whether you're referring to
> OH specifically, or FOSS in general. If former, it might be worth noting
> that all FOSS communities could/should be as awesomely welcoming as OH
> itself, and OH can help.
>
> Mike
>
>
> On Thu, Apr 17, 2014 at 11:43 AM, Kevin Zita <bleedgreenandgold at gmail.com>wrote:
>
>> Hello,
>>
>> I just submitted a blog post titled "What FOSS has taught me" and I'm
>> looking for some general feedback on it.  Any feedback is welcome!
>>
>> You can find it at:
>> http://openhatch.org/blog/?p=2591&preview=1&_ppp=0d750e7386
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>>
>> Kevin
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