[OH-Publicity] two blog posts about OSCTC events

[Mike Linksvayer]

These are really great! I have two super minor comments.

On Mon, Oct 28, 2013 at 9:44 AM, Shauna Gordon-McKeon <shaunagm at gmail.com>wrote:

> I have two posts ready to be reviewed, one a review of our Purdue event:
> http://openhatch.org/blog/?p=1981&preview=1&_ppp=0cd4c6e5bf
>

All of the top level bulleting could be lost, leaving just two small groups
of bullets. But I don't feel strongly...I guess everything gets a bullet
has its points.


> The other is a post of 'Infrequently Asked Questions' from Bloomington:
> http://openhatch.org/blog/?p=1987&preview=1&_ppp=b381d21894
>

In the last sentence I'd make the second second another.


> I welcome feedback.  (Especially from you, Asheesh!  You still owe me an
> edit of the IAQ.)  Also if anyone has opinions about which order to release
> them in, because I'm indifferent.  I was figuring we'd post one Tuesday and
> one Thursday.
>
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