[OH-Publicity] Draft JHU blog post -- feedback definitely requested
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Sat Nov 3 02:08:02 UTC 2012
Excerpts from Asheesh Laroia's message of Fri Nov 02 20:45:58 -0400 2012:
> Excerpts from Mike Linksvayer's message of Fri Nov 02 18:09:20 -0400 2012:
> > On Tue, Oct 30, 2012 at 8:56 AM, Asheesh Laroia <asheesh at asheesh.org> wrote:
> > > (And I intend to resize the image I embed before posting.)
> > >
> > > HTML: http://htmlpad.org/post-jhu-blog/
> > >
> > > Edit here: http://htmlpad.org/post-jhu-blog/edit
> > The end (bullets after "Get in touch!") looks sketchy. Maybe an
> > editing mistake, or incomplete?
> > It is kind of hard to follow the "evolving" section; in particular
> > "Starting after JHU" sounds odd in a post about JHU.
> Yeah -- good point about "Starting after JHU" being weird.
> I now think that's better as a separate post, rather than sticking it
> into the middle of this post.
> (Text moved here, nicknamed "Evolving program":
> http://htmlpad.org/evolving-program/edit (consider it very very draft;
> not something I consider shippable without serious work).)
> Also, er, right; you discovered my notes to myself at the end. I didn't
> realize I had left them in there before submitting.
> I've shrunk it tremendously, rewritten a bit, and blended a little bit
> of the "evolving program" text in as needed. I also fixed one tense
> mismatch problem.
> Please re-review: http://htmlpad.org/post-jhu-blog/edit +
After discussion with Mike, and some stealthy fixes to further agreement
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