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[OH-Publicity] Draft JHU blog post -- feedback definitely requested

Asheesh Laroia lists at asheesh.org
Sat Nov 3 02:08:02 UTC 2012


Excerpts from Asheesh Laroia's message of Fri Nov 02 20:45:58 -0400 2012:
> Excerpts from Mike Linksvayer's message of Fri Nov 02 18:09:20 -0400 2012:
> > On Tue, Oct 30, 2012 at 8:56 AM, Asheesh Laroia <asheesh at asheesh.org> wrote:
> > > (And I intend to resize the image I embed before posting.)
> > >
> > > HTML: http://htmlpad.org/post-jhu-blog/
> > >
> > > Edit here: http://htmlpad.org/post-jhu-blog/edit
> > 
> > The end (bullets after "Get in touch!") looks sketchy. Maybe an
> > editing mistake, or incomplete?
> > 
> > It is kind of hard to follow the "evolving" section; in particular
> > "Starting after JHU" sounds odd in a post about JHU.
> 
> Yeah -- good point about "Starting after JHU" being weird.
> 
> I now think that's better as a separate post, rather than sticking it 
> into the middle of this post.
> 
> (Text moved here, nicknamed "Evolving program": 
> http://htmlpad.org/evolving-program/edit (consider it very very draft; 
> not something I consider shippable without serious work).)
> 
> Also, er, right; you discovered my notes to myself at the end. I didn't 
> realize I had left them in there before submitting.
> 
> I've shrunk it tremendously, rewritten a bit, and blended a little bit 
> of the "evolving program" text in as needed. I also fixed one tense 
> mismatch problem.
> 
> Please re-review: http://htmlpad.org/post-jhu-blog/edit + 
> http://htmlpad.org/post-jhu-blog/

After discussion with Mike, and some stealthy fixes to further agreement 
errors...

https://openhatch.org/blog/2012/getting-students-involved-in-open-source-at-johns-hopkins/

!

-- Asheesh.


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