[OH-Publicity] blog post needs feedback

[Shauna Gordon-McKeon]

I have a post about our participation in Grace Hopper Open Source Day
drafted here:
http://openhatch.org/blog/?p=2412&preview=1&_ppp=d5f296ae18

Feedback is much desired!  My brain feels a little fuzzy today (or maybe
frozen?) so I don't doubt I've made mistakes and phrased things inelegantly
here.

Note: the "see pictures here" link doesn't go anywhere, I still need to get
the event pictures uploaded to Asheesh's flickr account.

Thanks!
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