[Campus-neiu-staff] CSS - OpenHatch comes to NEIU

[Adler, Rachel]

OK by me.  You can remove the but in the last line by "But register".


On Wed, Apr 9, 2014 at 12:36 PM, Jeremy L. Grajales <
jeremygrajales at gmail.com> wrote:

> How bout...
>
> "
> This event is open to all students, but space is limited.
> All participants are required to register here
> http://chicago.openhatch.org/#signup.
> But register as soon as possible to save your seat!
>
> Hope to see you there.
>
> CSS Team
> "
>
>
> On Wed, Apr 9, 2014 at 12:27 PM, Adler, Rachel <r-adler at neiu.edu> wrote:
>
>> Maybe something like "Remember to sign up and reserve your spot now"?
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Apr 9, 2014 at 12:22 PM, Jeremy L. Grajales <
>> jeremygrajales at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> How?
>>>
>>> maybe instead of "The event is open to all students. Learn more, and
>>> sign up, here: "
>>>
>>> "Registration is open to all students.
>>> In order to register, follow this link <link>."
>>>
>>> Or how else would you stress the signing up part?
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On Wed, Apr 9, 2014 at 12:18 PM, Adler, Rachel <r-adler at neiu.edu> wrote:
>>>
>>>> no objection here. We may want to stress the signing up part more in
>>>> the email.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On Wed, Apr 9, 2014 at 12:12 PM, Jeremy L. Grajales <
>>>> jeremygrajales at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Alright. I'm sending this out to the student list. Any objections
>>>>> before I do?
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On Tue, Apr 8, 2014 at 10:45 AM, Shauna Gordon-McKeon <
>>>>> shaunagm at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>> Looks good to me.  :)
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On Tue, Apr 8, 2014 at 11:43 AM, Jeremy L. Grajales <
>>>>>> jeremygrajales at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> How is the following e-mail to send out to the student mailing list?
>>>>>>> This is just the template from the Google folder with the
>>>>>>> information plugged in.
>>>>>>> I also attached the most recent flyer .jpg to this e-mail.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> ****
>>>>>>> On April 26th 2014, OpenHatch and the Computer Science Society are
>>>>>>> inviting you to a day--long open source software immersion event.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> In the morning, open source contributors from various projects will
>>>>>>> teach you about open source licensing, collaboration tools, and how free
>>>>>>> software projects are organized. In the afternoon, they'll help you make
>>>>>>> contributions to open source projects. And throughout the day, they'll feed
>>>>>>> you, get to know you, and talk with you about opportunities for students in
>>>>>>> open source.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Open source software - software that is shared freely and available
>>>>>>> to build upon - is a great way to apply your programming skills to
>>>>>>> real--world projects and social causes. This event specially welcomes
>>>>>>> newcomers to that style of development, and the day begins with teaching
>>>>>>> workshops that anyone can follow.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Open source participation is one way to gain real--world skills and
>>>>>>> make connections that will last you through your career. Volunteer staff
>>>>>>> will include professionals and academics who use open source daily.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> The event is open to all students. Learn more, and sign up, here:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> http://chicago.openhatch.org
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> _______________________________________________
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>>>>>>> Campus-neiu-staff at lists.openhatch.org
>>>>>>> http://lists.openhatch.org/mailman/listinfo/campus-neiu-staff
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
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>>>>
>>>>
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>>>> Rachel F. Adler, Assistant Professor
>>>>
>>>> Department of Computer Science
>>>> Northeastern Illinois University
>>>> 5500 North St. Louis Avenue, Chicago, IL 60625
>>>> r-adler at neiu.edu
>>>> http://cs.neiu.edu/~radler
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>> Rachel F. Adler, Assistant Professor
>>
>> Department of Computer Science
>> Northeastern Illinois University
>> 5500 North St. Louis Avenue, Chicago, IL 60625
>> r-adler at neiu.edu
>> http://cs.neiu.edu/~radler
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